My Masterpiece

My House

Date: November 26, 2007
Posted by: Heather Wallace
(Vancouver / CA)
house.jpg

My sweet
harsh
house
was a moist stone
falling like hard rain
in a song about sun.

-copyright Heather Wallace


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Re: My House

By Heather Wallace, November 30, 2007 at 10:43

Thanks for the feedback Liz - I wrote that ages ago, but it was nice to pull it out again. I have thought about getting this poem tattooed on my body because it really does capture it all.

Re: My House

By Liz, November 30, 2007 at 10:16

I like the contrasting imagery. It definitely makes you think a bit.