The Affair Love Killed

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My Masterpiece

Date: January 17, 2008
Posted by: bedazzled

Its not a masterpiece its just the only thing i have written i was proud of.

Time incoherent,
Scattered mind
Grave thoughts
Answers find

Endless circle
Passion drives
Open choices
Others Lives

Relentless guilt
Pain-filled eyes
Daily patterns
Epic lies

Peace required
Heal inside
Patiently waiting
Emotions hide

5/12/06

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Re: The Affair Love Killed

By bedazzled, February 13, 2008 at 21:52

Thank you. I had never written poetry before that or tried after other than as a joke. It came to me very quickly after writing the first line and just seemed to flow from there. Why is it that pain seems to be the author of what you hold dear?

Re: The Affair Love Killed

By Robyn Stubbs, January 24, 2008 at 16:20

Thanks, bedazzled - I think it's great :)