Day-Dreaming is a subject studied,
conscious design or premeditation, is
an interesting subject...especially for use in poetry! For me to paint a
written picture in a short frame of
words is nothing short of cleaver, witty and the combination of deep thought, simular to day-dreaming a trance like state of mind can produce
something like this Poem: 'AWE'
The trick is to connect Day-dreaming
to Reality and to form a small piece
of entertainment that enacts a story
by a sequence of images.
*****Awe*****
It may only be virtuality, but to me,
when I pick-up where I left off
From that poem journal you sent,
Why, my dreamy eyes see yours...
Your voice so soothing as I read
verse after verse, crystal clear each syllable I hear...
I picture you on my pillow, here...
The words I want to tell you, I'm reading...
How you knew the right words I'm feeling,
No one thing nor anyone has ever effected me, this way, the imagery your words paint,
I feel my heart is pounding as I long for, more of your sweet expressions that come,
Through each rhyming poem...
I'm full of your lovely passions,
I mark your words, and awe, all
I set the covers together,
rest that little love,...
This starts over, as I reach...
to pick up your call.
The trick is to connect Day-dreaming
to Reality and to form a small piece
of entertainment that enacts a story
by a sequence of images.




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This contributor's writing
By Heather Wallace, December 5, 2006 at 09:52This contributor's writing is always a bit elusive. This one borders on poetry, which is not what Orato is about.
I wonder what other people thing of it...
Heather